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Ene, up close and personal by slashL Ene, up close and personal by slashL
Render: fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201…

By: : :iconsandrareina:

Made in PS

Critique would be nice =D
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:icondragonofdistruction:
DragonOfDistruction Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You're amazing!
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FortuneTellerKitKat Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Ene is my favorite. :U
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Beautiful :lovely: 
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:iconfuumika:
fuumika Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you should credit the original artist too-
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slashL Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
-puts on traveling gear- Ahhhh, the hunt for the original artist of the render begins I am a dummy! 
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AyakaYougen Featured By Owner Edited Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
commented on behalf of :iconprojectcomment:'s 52 week challenge

This piece looks great! Ene is so adorable what a cutie omg :iconasdfghplz:

There isn't a lot I think I should give you advice on, but I hope this helps all the same!

face
The face shading looks great, and it's very fitting for the style that you used. But at the same time, Ene looks kind of pale - probably because of the grey used to shade. There are many types of greyish tones, some of which are more pink than grey, which are very useful when shading skin. Pinkish, peachy tones make a person look healthier and sometimes cuter. 
So perhaps you could add a blush of some kind?

hair
There is just one suggestion I have, which is to add highlights in her hair. adding lighter parts make her hair shiner, more eye catching and pleasing to the eye. Since both Ene and the background are slightly dull, it would do the piece good to have more contrast.

other
as I mentioned earlier, Ene and the background are both slightly dull. I suggest that you brighten up Ene by adding highlights and shading more darkly, so that she doesn't blend into the background. 

Thanks for reading and I hope to see more art from you in the future! :iconrubcheeksplz:
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:iconslashl:
slashL Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thanks for the feedback =D
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AyakaYougen Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome, and feel free to note me if you have any questions!
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:iconfuumika:
fuumika Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this person didnt draw this . x .
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AyakaYougen Featured By Owner Edited Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I read through the description and the render link should be a link to another render - although I can't be sure if this is original or not. Though the critique still applies, since it's about coloring mostly.
thanks for telling me!
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